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  THIS SUCKS.

  September 27, 2010 by Lapidus7

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  If you don't like my story don't read and also you story sucks.

  October 11, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  WOW, this is cool :)

  September 26, 2010 by Station7

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  really ?

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  Yes, I'm going to translate it in Dutch I think. Do you think it's good if I put it here?

  September 26, 2010 by Station7

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  Maybe

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  Lithuanian!!! :D And thank you for translating, kind Just Sayin' :) hehe maybe I should try writing stories in Korean?

  September 26, 2010 by SunHwa

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  I used this site to translate:

  microsofttranslator.com

  Tom, you can write your story in your language, then place the words in the translator to change to English. Then make any changes for words that didn't translate. Then, you can post the English version for the blog. Maybe that will help you?

  September 26, 2010 by Just Sayin'

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  This is the translation. I just noticed it did not pick up the last section.

  < User blog: Tom Jacob Episode 2: New Story part 1.

  Flashback-Anthony

  Real Time

  Derek has been living in the jungle, together with Theresa, Lyle, Robert, Caroline, Jared and Daniel.

  Daniel: as I understand you buildings si House?

  Lyle: you you were on the island?

  Derek: just go to the House.

  Lyle: why?

  Derek: you will see.

  Robert opened the House door and saw computer.

  Robert: Computer time technicians?

  Derek: it's already a long time ago and doesn't work.

  Robert: definitely.

  Caroline: who built this House?

  Derek: his name was Walt Lloyd.

  Theresa: Walt Lloyd. But he was on Oceanic Flight 815.

  Derek looks to Theresa.

  Derek: Theresa like you do know.

  Theresa: just one man told me.

  Derek: what his name was Ben Linus.

  Theresa: So how do you know?

  Derek: a single scoundrel.

  Lyle: Atsiprasiau what is Walt and Ben?

  Derek: that's irrelevant now we have to go from this home.

  Caroline: why?

  Derek: just went from home and everything is fine.

  Caroline: OK.

  Then Dere, Caroline, Theresa, Lyle, Robert, Jared and Daniel came out of the House and then to the ju has come to the unknown man.

  Derek: who are you.

  Man: my name is Adam Malkovich and I need your help.

  Lost

  
  

  
  Flashback

  Derek was the airport bar. Then the old man came to the ju ...

  Old man: Good Day.

  Derek: Hi Ben, how did you palikai island.

  Ben: my secret.

  Derek: definitely.

  Ben: Because you know that your airplane crashed on the island?

  Derek: who do you mean said?

  Ben: Charlie Hume.

  Derek: definitely.

  Ben: Just keep in touch with other people of man all candidate from an airplane will be lost.

  Derek: I already know.

  Ben: that's a luck.

  And then, Ben has come.

  Real Time

  Anthony watched a few people and then it came Elonora.

  Elenora: someone close to you has disappeared from the airplane?

  Anthony: my wife I'm now wondering where it is.

  Elenora: how Derek said that the island took its tikriausai it where one of the island.

  Continued to Allie.

  Allie: you believe in Derek?

  Elenora: Yes.

  Allie: Derek is stupid.

  Then Allie went further. Anthony look into it.

  At that time, Theresa, Lyle, Robert, Caroline, Jared, Daniel and Derek chatted with Adam.

  Derek: Adam you you were on an airplane?

  Adam: I can't say.

  Derek: why?

  Adam: you know Derek so because they do not allow me.

  Jared: what are they?

  Adam looks to Jared.

  Adam: it is better to ask Derek what is they are.

  Jared looks to Derek.

  Jared: then what are they?

  Derek: people who live on the island.

  Caroline: on the Islands are many people?

  Derek: Yes but I don't see them.

  At that time, Allie chatted with Thomas.

  Allie: they are crazy and took my order for several people. island

  Thomas: Maybe Derek and right.

  Allie: Wilt thou believe him?

  Thomas: yes I did.

  Then to came Ryan.

  Ryan: Allie why you don't believe Derek?

  Allie: why that Derek is stupid and everything.

  Ryan: and, if not?

  Allie: Then you stupid. You see only normal island.

  Elenora look into it.

  Elenora: O where fixed-wing aircraft.

  Allie: maybe he sank.

  Elenora: but I believe that Derek's right.

  Allie: How do you know which I believe that you are crazy and you're done.

  Then Allie went to the jungle.

  Derek, Theresa, Lyle, Robert, Caroline, Jared, Daniel and Adam in the jungle.

  Derek: this is where we go.

  Adam: you can help me and everything.

  Theresa: how we help you?

  Adam: not you all but I just need to Lyle, Theresa and Derek assistance.

  Lyle: why you need only our assistance?

  Adam: the island's secrets.

  Jared: and what are we to do?

  Adam: to be allowed to tell a lie on the beach and do something.

  Caroline: why?

  Derek: So that the island is the place as a result, no one can mystrey to know.

  Caroline: But do you know.

  Derek: because I am a candidate like all people who have not gone away but they are still not know well.

  Caroline: OK.

  Then Derek, Theresa, Lyle and Adam began to go to one pusia and Caroline, Jared, Daniel and Robert to another.

  Rebecca, Max, Molly and Eric was the beach – and then they saw that Caroline, Jred, Daniel and Robert pops out of the jungle.

  Rebecca; Hey and where others? 
  

  Max: I don't know.

  Then Max, Eric, Molly, Rebeca and a few other people accessing their.

  One man: O where others.

  Caroline: well, they said that they were still pabus jungle.

  Eric: definitely.

  At that time, Allie in the jungle.

  Allie: Island took people are crazy.

  But then appeared white sviesa and appeared in several people terp ju Jamies Pierce.

  Allie: what the velniu.

  
  Lost

  September 26, 2010 by Just Sayin'

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  Ok, there are a few words that did not translate....Please translate these words for me.

  Komputeri = Computer?

  nedirba =

  paziurejo =

  nieksas =

  Atsiprasiau =

  Derekai = Day?

  palikai =

  sudus =

  sekmes =

  kvailis =

  daugau zmonu =

  nemaciau =

  paprastata =

  dziungles =

  papludymi =

  paslpatinga =

  Thanks!

  September 26, 2010 by Just Sayin'

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  Nedirba-Don't work.

  Paziurejo-look.

  nieksas-scoundrel

  suduž-crash

  sekmės-luck.

  kvailys-stupid

  daugau žmonu-many people

  nemaciau-don't see.

  paprasta-normal.

  dziungles-jungle

  papludymi-beach.

  paslaptinga-mistery.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  I start write next episode and maybe today I put new episode.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  Just say you like my story or not.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  I'm glad you're writing it in Lithuanian.

  September 26, 2010 by BalkOfFame

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  But you don't understant Lithuanian much.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  Tom, I just used the translator and I can see your story flows much better this way. With the translator, I can still read it as well, even though I don't speak Lithuanian.  :-)

  September 26, 2010 by Just Sayin'

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  So you like my story.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  You understand what i write.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  I don't understand much Lithuanian. But I can tell that you've put more into this version, probably thinking more about the story itself than what English words to use. People talk about Walt and Ben instead of just mentioning their names. And "Kas po velniu" is a great ending.

  September 26, 2010 by BalkOfFame

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  You like my story.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  STOP THIS.

  September 26, 2010 by Lapidus7

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  Huh?

  September 26, 2010 by Ocie14

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  Yeah, Why??

  September 26, 2010 by Metroid101

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  Do you mean like stop the story??

  September 26, 2010 by Ocie14

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  Lapidus has a point.

  Tom, you don't speak English. Even most people who do can't write well. Don't write English stories. Instead, write in your own language. Then, you can write better stories. :-)

  September 26, 2010 by BalkOfFame

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  But if I write story in my own language . You don't understand.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  That doesn't matter. Just write the best story you can.

  September 26, 2010 by BalkOfFame

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  But you don't speak Lithuanian.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  You may find there are users here that do speak Lithuanian.  :-)

  Lostpedia is a very international community.

  September 26, 2010 by Just Sayin'

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  But you don't speak.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob

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  I think it's better if you write in your own language. Yes, I'm Dutch...but that's different. Dutch Lost writing is worse.

  September 26, 2010 by Station7

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  Okay I write story in my own language.

  September 26, 2010 by Tom Jacob